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스피킹의 기본은 롸이팅~ 빠른 롸이팅이 가능하다면 더 손쉽게 자기의사를 말로 표현할수있겠지요. 남이 쓴건 외워도 금방 잊어버려서, 자꾸 자꾸 써볼려구 하고있는데~ 쓰긴 써지는데 빨리 쓰는건 너무 안돼네요 여기도 회원들끼리 누구나 서로 쓴글올리고 서로 교정해주고 서로의 아이디어를 훔칠수있는 공간이 활성화 되었으면 좋겠다는 생각이 들어서 글하나 올려봅니다. 하루에 에세이 하나씩 써보구있는데, 오늘 쓴거 하나 올려봐요. (문제는 IELTS 에세이 기출문제구요 수험용으로 쓴거라 굉장히 문어체입니다.)
Question: Should animals be friends of people or should they be regarded as the source of people's food and clothes? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Answer: whether animal should be friends of people or not is an issue that arouses enormous controversy among the general public.
There are a number of reasons why I agree that animal should be a friend of people. Secondly, as the fact that some animals would be killed for improving human's medical industry nowadays, most of people are against experiments on animals. Therefore, after animals test, people would perform a funeral service for them as a human's companion to be born at good place repeat.
On the contrary, In some countries, some animals are only regarded as the source of food and cloths. Based on the above factors, I have discussed earlier that these animal's obedience, loyalty and intelligence can be a factor to make them human's friend. Considering animals' charactors like that, although some countries think about the animal of materials of necessities of life, it is natural that they are considered as a friend. |
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