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안녕하세요 아미고톡 가족 여러분~^^* 가장 쉽고, 재밌고, 효과적인 방법으로 우리 학생들의 영어실력을 향상 시킬 수 있도록 하기 위한 아미고톡의 가치(value)를 실현시키기 위해 오늘도 저는...이 늦은 시간에(매일 그렇지만,,) 야근을 하면서,,,, 소소한 기쁨을 드리고자 공지를 올립니다... 그동안에는 각 강사님들 개성대로 영작첨삭을 하였다면, 좀 더 보기 쉽고 영어학습에 유익한 방향으로 개선하기 위하여 첨삭 가이드를 통일하였습니다. 이번주 내로 모든 강사님들께 소개되며, 다음 주 부터는 전체 강사님들이 변경된 가이드를 적용하실 것입니다. 영작을 꾸준히 하는 것이 영어실력 향상에 엄청난 효과가 있다는 것은 이미 다 알고 있으시죠? 아미고톡에서는 무료로 제공되는 서비스이지만 영작첨삭 서비스를 유료로 판매하는 회사에도 납품이 될 정도로 아미고톡의 강사님들 실력은 인정을 받고 있습니다. 첨삭 서비스가 무료인 만큼 많은 이용을 하셨으면 좋겠는데 정작 우리 학생들은 많이들 이용을 하시지 않는 것 같아 너무 안타깝습니다ㅠㅠ 혹 이런 서비스가 있는 지 몰라서 이용을 하시지 못한 분들을 위해 다시 한번 이메일로도 공지해드리겠습니다. 영어는 정말 시간 싸움입니다. 시간을 투자한 만큼 너무나도 정직하게 딱 그.만.큼. 실력이 향상됩니다. 스마트폰으로도 모바일 웹에서 영작이 가능하니 출퇴근 또는 등하교하는 짜투리 시간에 한 두 문장이라도 꼭 써 보시기 바랍니다. 화이팅!!!!♡ Shine님께서 써주신 글로 예를 들어 보겠습니다.(추신: 소중한 영작글을 공개해주셔서 진심으로 감사드립니다.) 1. Tell me about a book you read that was inspiring. “Don’t cry for me, Tonj” is one of the most impressive books to me. Actually, the name of the book is “ Would you be my friend?” and this was later made into a film titled “ Don’t cry for me, Tonj”. This is a story about a catholic priest who is named Lee Tae-Seok. He was born into a poverty-stricken family. Notwithstanding financial problem, he went on to medical college and decided to become a priest after finishing medical school. He resolved on devoting his life to poor people. After he had trained to be a catholic priest, he went to Sudan. Sudan is one of the poorest countries in the world and it was ravaged by civil war in 1955-1972, 1983-2005. After decades of fighting, South Sudan finally became an independent country in 2011. However, South Sudan still remains in conflict with its northern neighbor, the Republic of Sudan. The farther, Lee Tae-Seok, went to Tonj, a small village in Sudan. There is no hospital, no school, no clean water, no electricity, any other public facilities. The first thing he did was to build a hospital. As a doctor, he cured thousands of patients and saved many lives. Furthermore, He was not just a doctor for the people of Tonj. He found a school for children and taught them music. He though that music is the best way to heal broken heart due to war. He loved Tonj with all his heart and soul, so do people of Tonj. But unfortunately, this beautiful story was not continue. He was diagnosed with last stage colorectal cancer. Lee Tae-Seok, known as the father of Tonj, passed away at the age of 48 after suffering from cancer in 2010. When he died of cancer, people in Tonj shocked, cried and feel sad for a long period of time. So that is the reason why film title is “Don’t cry for me, Tonj” I’m still moved to tears by thinking this moving story. His life makes me think What love is, What happiness is and What humanity is. Although he is not in this world, what he wants to say remains in our mind. 2. Have you watched a movie that came from a book? Yes, I have and this is one of my favorite movies, “The hunger games” that is based on a book by same title. This is a story about a girl who struggle for dictatorship that named Panem government. In order to control future rebellions by remembering the past rebellion, Panem government has a law that a male and a female teenager are selected by lottery from each district to play the Hunger game every year. This game rules are very simple. The twenty-four players must kill each other and survive in the wilderness until only one remains. In district 12, teenager Katniss, who is heroine, is great hunter an archer and she survive from cruel, terrible and inhuman game. After this game, she becomes the spark of revolution.
This story is made trilogy that are titled The Hunger Games, Catching Fire, Mockingjay and the third in the trilogy will be released November this year. I can’t wait to see this highly anticipated movie. I think the movie do justice to the book and give a realistic impression throughout the scenes. Also, the movie series give me a good chance to think the reason on matters such as the future, society and media. 다음은 강사님께서 첨삭해주신 글입니다. PART ONE: “Don’t cry for me, Tonj” is one of the most impressive books to me. >> “Don’t Cry for Me, Tonj” is one of the most impressive stories to me.
Actually, the name of the book is “ Would you be my friend?” and this was later made into a film titled “ Don’t cry for me, Tonj”. >> The actual title of the book is “Would You Be My Friend?” Later, this was made into a film entitled “Don’t Cry for Me, Tonj”.
This is a story about a catholic priest who is named Lee Tae-Seok. >> This is a story about a Catholic Priest
He was born into a poverty-stricken family. >> He was born in a poverty-stricken family.
Notwithstanding financial problem, he went on to medical college and decided to become a priest after finishing medical school. >> Notwithstanding financial problem, he pursued medicine at the university but decided to become a priest after finishing his course.
He resolved on devoting his life to poor people. >> He resorted to devoting his life to the poor
After he had trained to be a catholic priest, he went to Sudan. >> After his priesthood training at the seminary, he went to Sudan.
Sudan is one of the poorest countries in the world and it was ravaged by civil war in 1955-1972, 1983-2005. >> Sudan is one of the poorest countries in the world
There is no hospital, no school, no clean water, no electricity, any other public facilities. >> There were no public facilities like hospital school, clean water, and electricity.
Furthermore, He was not just a doctor for the people of Tonj. >> Furthermore, he was not just a simple doctor for the people of Tonj.
He found a school for children and taught them music. >> He founded a school for children and taught them music.
He though that music is the best way to heal broken heart due to war. >> He thought that music is the best way to heal a broken heart brought by war.
He loved Tonj with all his heart and soul, so do people of Tonj. >> He embraced Tonj with all his heart and soul and the people of Tonj loved him back.
But unfortunately, this beautiful story was not continue. >>
When he died of cancer, people in Tonj shocked, cried and feel sad for a long period of time. >> When he died
So that is the reason why film title is “Don’t cry for me, Tonj” >> This is the reason behind the movie title “Don’t Cry for Me, Tonj”.
I’m still moved to tears by thinking this moving story. >> I’m still moved by this touching story. I still shed my tears every time I watch it.
His life makes me think What love is, What happiness is and What humanity is. >> His life story makes me think about the meaning of Although he is not in this world, what he wants to say remains in our mind. >> Although he’s gone, his spirit remains in my heart. PART TWO: to follow CORRECTION GUIDE: 파란색 – 문법적으로 틀리진 않지만 어색한 표현 / 문장을 완성하기 위해 단어를 추가 노란색 - 문법적으로 틀린 문장 첨삭 초록색 – 무슨 뜻인지 알 수 없음 빨간색 - 스펠링 또는 대소문자 첨삭
>> - 강사님의 첨삭문장은 >> 표시 뒤에 쓰여진 것이며, 첨삭 문장이 없는 것은 고칠 필요가 없는 좋은 문장입니다. |
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